Φοῖνῑξ· (οἱ Φοίνικες εἰσὶν ὁ λαός ἐκ Φοινικίας καὶ Συρίας.)

[antiDOORON]

Hi all, I revised an entry of Rouse's Greek boy at home to include additional information.
I want to know if my new entry conforms to /Attic/ style.

here is my version:
Φοῖνῑξ· οἱ Φοίνικες εἰσὶν ὁ λαός ἐκ Φοινικίας καὶ Συρίας.

Could the word order be different? If so what would be the preferred Attic word order?

[spiros]

Looks good to me. Moving this to Αρχαία Ελληνικά (Ancient Greek Monolingual board). Please use only English→Ancient Greek Translation Forum for translations from English to Ancient Greek and Ancient Greek→English translation forum for translations from Ancient Greek to English.